All Comments on 'Stranger Than Fiction'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

lost any semblance of interest at the shaved pussy. Not into prepubescent girl bodies, sorry.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A very mediocre story with grammatical errors and juvenile composition.

It does, however, hold great potential . . .

A few things are required:

1. PROOF READER, not a suggestion, this is manditory.

2. Locations awareness, her room across the hall became located at the opposite end . . .

3. Thesaurus : for more maturethra and expletive words

4. Reality checks on Covid details.

With help, this story could form the basis of a series. Don't be afraid to seek-out a mentor to further develop the potential held for pornographic creativity.

Oh yes, getting laid a few more times, by a few more females, wouldn't hurt either.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Not a bad story. Shaved or not. Different strokes for different folks, eh?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Lmao at the people offended by a woman shaving her body as she desires. Yeah, I shave my pussy. Sometimes I let it grow. Sometimes I trim it. Shaving it doesn't make me "prepubescent" and if you cant distinguish reality from the sick shit in your head, stay away from women, you're clearly not safe to be around.

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