All Comments on 'Strangers in a Bar Pt. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Like I’ve been there too

Nice beginning. Anxious to see / read how you and this lady are able to reconnect. Chatting someone up is a lost art in too many of these offerings. Let the interactions meld and weave into a reality that reflects more of the average encounter ?

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Great start

Please write more.

I like the way you abruptly change the plot.

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