All Comments on 'Strangers in the Night'

First paragraph uses both past and present tense, and when referring to music the word is "bass" not "base". There is another time when you went to past tense. Perhaps you should read your story before you post it.

Good basic story. Editing would help a lot. Keep writing.

It's 'pounding bass', not 'pounding base'.

From a Bass player. :)