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by Kiwiboy1967

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Made me really wet x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Why do so many Lit contributors believe writing in second person is a good idea? How many published novels do this? It doesn’t work. Add to this a lack of understanding that you can’t write a sentence without a verb, and this story fails.

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Just a mature gentleman who enjoys writing stories for women. I have several stories which I will publish in time once edited. Most of my stories are fantasies written in a first/second person format. I would love to hear your thoughts (and feelings if you wish) and of course ...