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CatherwoodCatherwoodabout 5 years ago
Spare

Saying more with fewer words. Brief tryst, quick searching and struggling. You me gave just enough and leave me wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow!

I can't figure out if it is good or merely pretentious. Am I unsophisticated if I think your story is very good? It drew me in. I didn't stop reading until I was finished. I liked that you didn't expose your misunderstanding of anatomy like so many writers do here. You didn't need to.

The theme, the irony of sex pushing people farther apart, is very appropriate for the times.

I can't wait to read your next story.

R.

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