by urbanslut
Also, really enjoyed how you slightly suggest the other stories within this one... chess game, US visit, etc. Good work. Can't wait to read the rest.
You pack a nice punch in a short story. The reader is right there, beside you, feeling your thrill. Keep it up.
absolutely lovely and thrilling...wow got wet just reading it...please write more and soon
I liked and read all your stories again and again. please create sequels for night at the gas station and fifty rupee whore please.
Love the gradual escalation of the story, its late & i have to get up early but i'm going to read the next chapter...