by urbanslut
Love the gradual escalation of the story, its late & i have to get up early but i'm going to read the next chapter...
I liked and read all your stories again and again. please create sequels for night at the gas station and fifty rupee whore please.
absolutely lovely and thrilling...wow got wet just reading it...please write more and soon
You pack a nice punch in a short story. The reader is right there, beside you, feeling your thrill. Keep it up.
Also, really enjoyed how you slightly suggest the other stories within this one... chess game, US visit, etc. Good work. Can't wait to read the rest.