All Comments on 'Strip Club Surprise'

Two winners and a loser. The way it should be in this case

Interesting tale setting and outcome. I actually enjoyed it. Many thanks. Cheers.

Beautiful 🤗 😘

Very nice! 5 Stars.

Know similar stories in person. Girl hits “the jackpot” settles with a guy via clubs and has lots of kids.

i liked it, well written,,but it seemed rushed,,,maybe one more page to slow the tempo a bit..

Love both Tony and Kelly. Smart people with the balls to do what the need to do, are a big turn on. Hoping to see how this little tale of transition works out.. Especially when Kelly's half of the rent still leaves 4- months due on the lease the loser Conner can't pay.

Couldn't finish because he "too, my time getting dressed".

Fun story, some proofreading errors aside. Would definitely recommend letting the story sit for a week or so and then proofreading before publishing to tidy that up a bit.

Deserves a second chapter on how you built your life together

Enjoyed the storey but the ending was a bit short. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️