All Comments on 'Strip Club Surprise'

Enjoyed the storey but the ending was a bit short. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Deserves a second chapter on how you built your life together

Fun story, some proofreading errors aside. Would definitely recommend letting the story sit for a week or so and then proofreading before publishing to tidy that up a bit.

Couldn't finish because he "too, my time getting dressed".

Love both Tony and Kelly. Smart people with the balls to do what the need to do, are a big turn on. Hoping to see how this little tale of transition works out.. Especially when Kelly's half of the rent still leaves 4- months due on the lease the loser Conner can't pay.

i liked it, well written,,but it seemed rushed,,,maybe one more page to slow the tempo a bit..

Know similar stories in person. Girl hits “the jackpot” settles with a guy via clubs and has lots of kids.

Very nice! 5 Stars.

Beautiful 🤗 😘

Interesting tale setting and outcome. I actually enjoyed it. Many thanks. Cheers.

Two winners and a loser. The way it should be in this case