All Comments on 'Strip Poke-him'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Belongs in gay male.

Miscategorization gets all points deducted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not what I expected

That was great. Looking forward to more in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

awesome story hope there is a second part to come !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic story!

Great story, i Loved it!!! I am sure Jamie is being indeed put into the category "gay male" by Dawn ;) never mind what he thinks about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story!

Hope to read what Jamies mouth gets into, or around actually, in the future!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Slap her.

And walk away. This story is over before it started and we don't have to waste our time reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

I've read this dozens of times. The shock of it the first time was beyond words. Great story. I'd love to see more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Such a ridiculous story - I'm STILL laughing.

At how bad it is. Badly written dialogue, poor storyline and an unbelievable ending. Did it ever occur to you that he might simply beat the shit out of her, take the tape and walk away? Still laughing at how bad this was, even for fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Ya, that was hot. I wish this author was still writing.

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