All Comments on 'Strip Poker Gone Wild'

Story is good, but punctuation and grammar is off and not consistent.

i should be capitalized.

"que" is "cue"

Second to last para - you are already making love to Megan when your wife tells you to make love to her.

Sometimes it is confusing who is doing what to whom.

A familiar story, but well told. Nice debut.

. . . because had very similar experience with wife and next door neighbor. Story is well written for first try.