by Whiskeyandbeer5754
Great debut. Hot without going over the top. Please continue.
Don't ask for permission, she already gave it to you to decide. Only a girl can shake her sloppy floppy ass. Guys gyrate theirs.
While I'm at it, wrong category, this goes in Wet dreamers
Good start, however, the wife having her unsuspecting husband perform at a bachelorette party is a very old story line that’s been written probably 50 times on Literotica. Hope your next story is more original and more erotic.
Its an old story, but it was done with great authenticity. Usually the naked guy either gets all caughtup and dioriented by his feelings about what happens or just performs like a pornstar. But hear the naked guy was subdued, not very demonstrative, and behaving exactly like an ordinary heterosexual married guy would act-- by not saying much and just recounting the story with factual, detached accuracy. A fine effort by a talented author interested in keeping it real. It would be interesting to see what you could do if you took the same story line but this time went totally over th top like some other commenters might have wanted for wanking purposes.
I appreciate everyone’s feedback! There will be more. I’ve never written about this subject matter before and it’s a fun escape.
I don't read too many of these male stripper stories because they tend to put too much focus on the guy, and the women never get naked. You did both beautifully. I only wish he could have cum more and been allowed to have sex with some. But I completely understand why you didn't. You're story was much more reasonable and realistic than mine.
I loved this story. The best part is it's believability. I can see a wife doing this to show off to her friends yet keeping the situation under control. Good job.
I Would Love To Be That Husband With Wife and Friends! Great Exciting Erotic Story! I Loved It! How About A Couple Of Encore Chapters?
One of the hottest stories I have read and the first one of yours. Think I will try another just for grins.
Cheers
SAGE
Fantastic. It’s just realistic enough to be believable. This is a great fantasy, and I’m glad I got to read it.
You have a way of mixing the right amount of story, with the right amount of sex. A story that is all sex is boring, having a story to hold it together gives much more interest.
You did comment that there would be more.
Excellent story would love to see a follow up for another girl's party of some kind.