All Comments on 'Stripping My Dreamy Sis-in-law, Lois'

Its a good story, and the twist ending somewhat saves it from the primary problem that it was suffering from.

Your descripitions are excellent even if I don't entirely care for some of your substitute words that's just a matter of personal taste and who am I to judge on that front.

My bigger problem (sans the save) is that you'd want a slower burn if she was actually so prudish. Maybe your experiences are wildly different from my own but I've never seen weed or alcohol make someone into someone they aren't. It drops a lot of barriers sure but anybody who is too prudish to see you without a shirt on and suddenly starts going overboard like this is probably a few steps past consent.

Again the bigger problem is that its too much too fast. You could have told the exact same story except change it so the husband was the one a tiny bit uncomfortable and the sister was just enough older to be getting self conscious about sag which you take the time to realistically handle. I tend to be more comic/movie in my own writing. They have their own gravity fields because fuck you that's why.

It certainly isn't non-con/noncon you're probably gonna get a few down votes just from people who came here looking for a woman forced and this barely qualifies as surprised.

Thanks for your comments. I appreciate your taking the time and thoughts to include details.

As for the speed, yes it was fast. I knew from the start it was all a dream (for a certain reason, it had to be) so it ran at dream speed. What I chose to leave out is that this is a sort of prequel to my Emancipation series with the same people. Lois's changes in that 'reality' are much slower, so this story could be real in that story time line.

She is based on someone I knew and I let her real conflicts into the stories. Real Lois sees herself as a liberal, free thinking, hippie-like soul who is accepting of fetishes and varied sex but does not take part (mostly due to her germ phobias). Behind that self image is a desire to BE that person. That puts her constantly close to the edge and getting high is a convenient excuse to go there.

Lois's husband had been in a loveless marriage for too many years and hoped to score with his sis-in-law, the liberal narrator's wife. He had about given up, so while a bit jealous of his wife's finally acting on her urges, he was happy to gain full access to flirty Sue.

In many of my stories based on her sister, I hinted or pointed out that Sue was indoctrinated that multiple sex partners before 25 is the norm so she didn't see herself as promiscuous, though most would say she was. She kept up a chaste facade while rebelling against it. That was one of several major conflicts in her life. She used booze often as an excuse for flirting and yielding to advances as well as an excuse for exposing herself to friends and strangers - as long as it 'wasn't her fault.' The effect of booze was to amplify her tendency to reveal her true self - often her nipples, or naked at a window. So booze for either sister effectively greased the skids.

I hoped the title didn't give away the dream concept too soon.