All Comments on 'Stripping the Tease Pt. 02'

Left much to be desired after part 1

I really liked your story, part one was judt great, but I thought part 2 was a little unrealistic. Just me but I could have seen all 3 going home for a night of 3 way sex. However, you may have been trying to write in an activity which was not predictable. All in all I enjoyed it very much and noticed myself getting wet as I read. Good work - keep it up!

A very believable conclusion to the story. Excellent writing.

I really enjoyed the story. Unlike Anonymous, I'm glad you went in a less conventional direction. It's been a while since you've posted, and I'm glad you've started again. I'm looking forward to your future work.

I don't often comment, but I very much enjoyed reading both this and part 1. Like another commenter pointed out, very realistic ending; with dime-a-dozen fantasies out there, male characters with 8-12 inch dicks, perfect-bodied females, it's a sure relief and pleasure to see some realism for a while. Thank you!