All Comments on 'Stronger Than Death'

This is a story about ghost sex or what?

This story was doing really well, until the last paragraph which I think was meant to be some kind of witty sentimental thing.

You're telling us, that she's been watching him for three years, and she doesn't even know his NAME? I mean, come on.

I know this is a story about time travelling ghosts, but seriously. It doesn't mean you go ahead and break the simplest continuity rules.