All Comments on 'Stuck in August'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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DirtyOlMan1954DirtyOlMan1954about 4 years ago
She Grows On You

It took me a while to like the Hannah character. Just wasn't someone I couldn't warm up to in the story. However, the story did take a nice turn and I got into it for a minute, until it was back to Hannah and her thoughts. Not my kind of broad, for sure.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Very Original Storyline*****

Great job of storytelling very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

OmenainenOmenainenover 2 years ago

Excellent writing. Apart from the homophobia I really liked Hannah and felt for her. I kind of wished she would find love, but I guess sexual satisfaction is the next best thing! I laughed at “trifecta of meh.”

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...