All Comments on 'Stuck on You Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

love this mamicita hope there’s more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

really good stuff

dachshundboydachshundboyover 2 years ago
Really good start

Liking the buildup so far, and am looking forward to what you have in store next.

Are you going to be alternating POV's? It’d be interesting to get Ana's thoughts and perspective on what’s budding between the two of them from time to time. Will they just be fuckbuddies? Will they progress into an actual relationship? How will he deal with her celebrity status? Only time will tell, and I’m looking forward to finding out!

TheNewcomerTheNewcomerover 2 years agoAuthor

@dachshund I have considered Ana’s pov, but so far I haven’t made plans to alternate. However, I do try and bring her thoughts in different ways so that she isn’t just a “fuck doll” for the MC and readers. Maybe I’m delusional, giving the medium we’re in.

I do have an ending planned unlike other stories that I end up not finishing.

Thanks for reading.

Slyguy1313Slyguy1313over 2 years ago

An excellent slice of life narrative, can't wait to see more!

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