by ManhattanMaster
I'm the author and I didn't know there was such a thing as "public comments" when I posted it. But I've gotten private feedback from countless women who have told me the story got them extraordinarily aroused. I've only had one man (on the internet who knows?) write me and he liked the story but wished "I" (he meant the narrator of the story) had "fucked the red head too." That was a wonderful and funny response. If anyone ever reads "Student Library" again I hope they will leave a public comment.
All the best, ManhattanMaster
it seemed a little far fetched at first, but with the way you ran with it i eventually decided not to care. good stuff.
Incredibly hot! I wish that was me and not the lucky S.O.B. in the story!
This is the hottest story I think I've ever read. I came so hard reading this, I now really want a man who'd do this to me.
Excellent story. :)
I would definately say this lived up to the "H"! ;)
Should be a "W" for Wet, really.
~C (49rldy)
I went to the stories that got an E and an H both and picked this by random (well I suppose its having to do with bdsm helped too - lol). It is both erotic and extremely well written. And super sexy.
It's a long story and I started touching myself at the beginning and didn't stop until the end and had two orgasms on the way. Great story. wow.
I am overwhelmed. I lean towards BDSM and I feel over loaded. Yes, it was a long story. You had a lot to fit in, didn't you WRITER ? You write well. The story moved along. Good use of dialogue. Just very erotic entertainment. KEEP writing ! 5 STARS.