by Kmaster3000
Plausible? Not so much by real life standards, but in the context of the story, I can dive in. And your writing is always good. But I’m already shipping the Headmaster and the teacher.
its not bad but the random ass racism in the middle ruins it, and the story doesnt change in any capacity if you remove it, so it just seems like the author wanted an excuse to use a slur
Interesting social phenomenon. In these stories you can call a woman a bitch, whore, slut, or cunt, but make a derogatory racial slur and people call you out for it. Glad to see it happen, but interesting all the same.
In my experience those who are the most hypersensitive about race tend to be the most prejudiced even if they think its well meaning.
So don't worry too much about it the story was enjoyable all round.
Interesting and rather unique idea to begin with. Not sure the head mistress at the end is reasonable, but let's see....
Blackmail is always disturbing, even if Lilly arguably deserved it completely. Requires quite a lot of suspension of disbelief, but the long, slow sex scenes make it really hot. I loved the idea of sending her instructional porn videos. Born teacher!
The racial slur is just in character -- youv've painted him as something of an asshole, and this fits right in.