by WantMore99224
Erotic wordsmith must be your middle name. Thanks for another awesome chapter.
Excellent, but not as good as the first. The lack of foreplay is a flaw after the first chapter was all about foreplay.
Aside from that, this was a good story. Again the dialogue was well-done. The sex scenes could have been longer and more descriptive. For me, the intimacy was missing. The introduction of Rob's parents was a good idea. I see a problem with Sandy wanting more than an affair.
Well-written, totally unconvincing, the protagonist is so deeply into himself that he's boring, Brian is an idiot.