All Comments on 'Study Buddy Pt. 02'

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Stayaway4USStayaway4USabout 1 year ago

Erotic wordsmith must be your middle name. Thanks for another awesome chapter.

Reacher84Reacher84about 1 year ago

Awesome. Looking forward to part three of this story.

mitchawamitchawaabout 1 year ago

Excellent, but not as good as the first. The lack of foreplay is a flaw after the first chapter was all about foreplay.

Aside from that, this was a good story. Again the dialogue was well-done. The sex scenes could have been longer and more descriptive. For me, the intimacy was missing. The introduction of Rob's parents was a good idea. I see a problem with Sandy wanting more than an affair.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well-written, totally unconvincing, the protagonist is so deeply into himself that he's boring, Brian is an idiot.

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