All Comments on 'Stump'

Hi, really liked/loved the story even if the end unfortunately prevents a sequel with Stump unless someone ressurects him and given you write a sequel. Your

Ups pressed the wrong button. I liked the chemistry between the two / three Main Character's depending how you look at Elowen's situation with the split personality. I thought the pacing was good also. Have you thought about a sequel?

Nice romance, and a _wonderful_ change of pace from the stereotypes. 5-stars

Great story!

A lot of twist and turns ... held me to the end. A love story that we knew would not end well.

This was a bit different but enjoyable to see your writing applied in other contexts. Glad to see you are growing as a writer. (Personally, I prefer stories being broken up into chapters, so appreciated that it was done within this story as well. Seeing 14 pages can be daunting)

I really enjoyed the story. Kind of hated the ending though. Call me a sap but I like a happy ending. That said it was a pretty decent story nonetheless. I did find a small error though. At one point before Stump and El leave to pick up the children you accidentally switch the tavern and the inn in one sentence saying the tavern is a two story building.

the ending suck. why can't there be good ending even in fantasy

I get you all about the ending to my story, my first draft ended on a happy note, but I wanted it to have a beginning, middle and an end. It's quite long and I don't plan to write a sequel.

Think about it though, was the ending bad? Stump left Elowen with a piece of himself and his last days were the happiest of his life. In the end he got the girl and went out like a hero. I found it a fitting end for old Stump.

Contrary to some opinions here, I liked the ending. There was no need for this to become yet another unfinished series on literotica. Thank you for the story.

Hello, I am most impressed with this story that I have ever read. Normally, I'm a person who likes to draw as a hobby. After reading it, it inspired me to want to draw an illustration for this story a lot. Even more impressive at the end. I want you to write stories about monsters, ghosts and other mystical things. Thank you very much

Hello, as far as I've read, this story is the most impressive. Normally I like to draw as a hobby and after reading this story I was inspired to draw a lot. It was a very perfect ending. I ask you to compose a story about monsters, ghosts and other mystical things. Thank you very much

Fucking outstanding story if this was a book series I would read it over and over til I wore out the pages. It’s bittersweet that there’s no sequel but a great ending. Keep up the great work

I kinda felt that Stump wasn't going to make but despite that I enjoyed it, he unknowingly left a gift behind.

Dear Author,

Great job.

Outstanding story.

Awesome story! Loved the werewolf fights and how gruesome it was when picking off the villagers. You do a great job of painting it out with your words. No usually into old & ugly with young & beautiful but this was an exception. Again, awesome job!

This was great. Thanks for the story.