All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 01'

Very very nice indeed, I don’t know if it’s a true story or not but it did come across as very realistic. Lovely and sensual.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

This was very romantic and erotic.

Thanks for the kind comments.

Can anyone tell me please, is it possible to make edits after posting?

Loved it, very romantic and erotic. It certainly aroused me and i am sure everyone else who reads it. Please write more, i hope that i will get to know when u publish any 5*, favourited and an author to follow.

I enjoyed this little piece. nicely done. I gave it a five.