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All Comments on 'Submission: Dave's Journey'

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9to59to5about 2 years ago

I really like this. More I hope

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

THIS Is THE GREATEST STORY!!!! EVER!!!

Keep going :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is great! I hope there is so much more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

An amazing start to what I hope will be an amazing long story. Great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But nothing more than an introduction.

Four stars for potential going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was a pretty hefty list of rules to remember/memorize. 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

RULES 5 AND 6 are incompatable .

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