All Comments on 'Submission Over July 4th Weekend'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You HAD a good story...

until the 2nd page. I enjoyed it and got very hot and bothered with the relationship between these two, but what started out as excellent turned out to be a little disappointing. Keep at it though, loved the "I'm a naughty slut!" bit! Probably because I am one.

APAPalmost 19 years ago
On the contrary...

an excellent twist...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Dashing!!!!

I loved the twist...I found it to be intriguing. For a submissive to know her Mistress so well, ahhhh. Such joy!

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