All Comments on 'Submissive Asian'

This was really well written, but the raceplay elements did feel repetative after a while, especially towards the end where he's just using the same four terms every time he speaks

Would absolutely love to see you write some gay Asian raceplay stories, as there really is almost nothing out there like that. Always wanted to read something about a tall masculine Asian dude subbing to a smaller less impressive white guy

Not bad, I enjoyed the premise and the outward raceplay involved. A bit repetitive, in the sense that there was a lot of talking. I understand that's how raceplay is conveyed but it got a bit stale. Such as, the white dom would tell her what he was going to do to her, followed by her reply of yes sir, and then the action sequence describing and doing exactly what he just said. Maybe a bit more exploration on why the Asian enjoyed this dynamic.