All Comments on 'Submissive Assistant Pt. 02'

The story title “submissive assistant” was what attracted me to your story I didn’t notice the category was non con/ reluctance, the title implied BDSM clearly nothing could be further from the truth. Honestly it’s kinda insulting to those who are submissive.

Tess (UK)

I understand you were disappointed. But part of your disappointment was not seeing the category. There is a reason that Literotica uses categories. To keep people from being disappointed. And my submissive loved the story. You shouldn't try to speak for all submissives. I apologize if I offended you.

... like an one-scene-interlude ... hope for more chapters coming

How can anyone enjoy something this short and messy? It is like someone drank too much, vomited on the floor, and now is offering people to have a look. Weird part is that there actually seem to be people who enjoy it.

I'm fine with you not liking it. We all have different tastes. But your critique of my writing leaves something to be desired also. Insulting by being gross is fairly amateurish. And why read the second part if you didn't like the first. Again, I agree to disagree. Take care.