All Comments on 'Submissive Saturday Ch. 01'

I feel your story although a good attempt at capturing the Dom/sub attachment lacks the emotion gained through experience. I do not wish to sound hard or offend but feel you may like to indulge yourself in some actual BDSM play to understand the mental bond that far outweighs the physical act.

I didn't find a thing wrong with this story! <3 *sighs longingly*