All Comments on 'Submissive Stepmother'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Holy Fuck!

This is the BEST story I've read in a very long time! It was well worth the length and the quick orgasm counts to see the character development and ingenuity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
great tempo

very nice!

Auntie_VictoriaAuntie_Victoriaover 13 years ago
Such A Weak Little Bitch Stepmother

Laura is one weak little bitch of a stepmother! She deserved every bit of torment that happened to her! The ending of the story was a bit weak however!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Started out great

This started out as a great story until Susan showed up and then it went from a simple control story to physical and mental abuse. Not sure how you can get excited about starving someone. I seriously hope you don't have kids or own a dog.

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I have written several pornographic / erotic stories, and I'm trying to improve my writing skills. I write stories that I'm interested in, and I try to add humor and personality to the stories. Almost all of my stories are about female domination. A few of my stories are ab...