All Comments on 'Subroutine Ch. 02'

Sci fi or trans but not here

Xzy89c1, there, so far, is no evidence of how, thus no "sci-fi." There is, however, evidence of what, and that is a person that has been, and is being, mind-controlled. Thus, the categorizing. The person being trans seems to be more a character detail than a focus of the story, which is probably why that wasn't chosen, either.

I cannot stress enough how much I am enjoying reading your brilliant and skillful writing. The pacing is so good. It is evolving at a believable rate; it doesn't feel rushed. I love how much depth you give these characters. See you after the next chapter <3

The link to the next one is missing, but these are great