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All Comments on 'Subservient One Ch. 04'

by spider007

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wrong category. It should be in "Really fucking stupid"

Or the ubiquitous "The author is a loser who's never had sex....with another human being".

All kidding aside, the whole story was horrible, lame and boring. If this is the best you have, I would suggest you don't write again. Ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Agree with the First Comment

May be the worst I've ever read on this site and that is saying something. Take a rest. This is NOT erotic. Just sick.Incest??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WTF

I guess you don't like women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
you should be

You should be in prison just for your thoughts asshole.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

So bad it makes worthless look good.

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