by spider007
The worst I have ever read on this site. Could not even finish it Belongs in another category. I just don't think they have one for pure crap stories
Your writing skill is fine. This theme sucks, no pun intended, and is degrading more than erotic.
The previous comments were written by lesbians. You need more rim jobs.
I've ever read. You are very, very sick and obviously need help.
if the story is so bad nd sick as you say, wtf are you sill reading it. You're the one who needs to seek mental help!