All Comments on 'Succubus Master Pt. 08'

Easily one of my favorite stories in recent years. Thanks for writing and keep it up!

This has turned into my favourite story on literotica I just can’t get enough of it thank you for entertaining me so much.

I’m enjoying this story. I hope you will continue. Thanks.

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Another great add, keep it up please (:

"Say no more, Jan. We'll be happy to help," Ella said, ever-so-generously volunteering both of us. I just reminded myself, again, that I needed Janice to like me.

Wtf? She decides? Told you, in no way does he deserve the word master at all, even tho thats the title that made me read this story..

"My apartment, in case I summon you."

I chuckled. She really was stubborn.

"I think you're forgetting that you work for me," I said. “

HALLELUJAH, he stood up for himself and didnt get pushed around by a women for once!!!!!

Rayna handed me the keys to her Lexus, saying, "What's mine is yours, Master." I felt like I should protest, but she waved me off,

His mom had more then 20mil right? Cant buy the son of a literal cocksucker a car so he isn’t dependent on El and Rayna all the time?

“I went to my desk and tried to do a little research. I actually got pretty engrossed in it - so much so that when I heard the knock at my door,”

Its been what? 7/8th time that he is reading/researching and so engrossed all the time? Yet 0 results, just skip this shit if doesnt add any value

“I knew I'd outed myself as the biggest idiot in the world.“ why does he have to be so pathetic, freezing up, akward and nervous all the time. Cant he just be normal?

Also Rayna is like the big boss and max is more of a dildo side character in the story at this point. The story doesnt revolve around him. Plus why did they all feel a need to explain and validate themselves to Janice in the first half? Plus hes whoring his women out to work for her, now the whole town is going to see them pictured as sex slaves on a flyer kneeling at. janices feet?? Wth. All so he can buy books from her? Which apparently have 0 info because its been. 8 chapters and he is still absolutely clueless about that stupid sword. Not to mention just a few minutes ago he said he will slow down and figure some shit out, and then hes kissing Janice? Janice is probably the most annoying character in this story for me, she adds 0 value to the story

are you going to make him a evil ass hole or did he always hate his mother ,I mean so far she is the only one that he calls a slut.

Is he ever going to bang his mother sister and her two girlfriends. I can see the point of the story of them being the main characters of the story for the first few chapters then nothing. As for Janice he should just man up and bend her over and claim her instead wasting time. This guy doesn’t seem to know what he wants or where he’s going. I hope the story livens up a bit in then next chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Mom gets hers in a big way

5/5

lowkey get the sense that janice wants to cuck maxx.. see about stealing one or all his girls from him.. and instead of being smart, and just buying the books he needs with the money he has saved.. he is letting himself be led by self imposed mediocrity, into what she wants.. while he holds back his own desires.. honestly, if he doesnt put her in her place, he will find her in competition for his place with the girls.