All Comments on 'Succubus Master Pt. 11'

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Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 1 year ago

One of my favorite stories. I enjoyed this chapter. Thanks.

HemmingswayHemmingswayover 1 year ago

Another chapter that is a winner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This one adds too little to the plot, sadly.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago
Sadly I agree with the previous comment

This storyline is starting to get stagnant move it on a bit. For example Liz, more slaves, Merlin, the pesty priests, angels, the creator bloody hell I can go on and on. Now that I’ve given you food for thought get your arse into gear for fuck sake and give us many many more chapters ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is getting dull. Sex scenes are nice and all but give me some plot. Where is the story. The whole slave thing is played out in my opinion. Get on with the sword and priest. Get some strife going on. Stories seasoned with good sex scenes are ace but this is becoming sex scenes without story.

Logistical_NightmareLogistical_Nightmareabout 1 year ago

Ha, big strong demon boy is a cuck after all, what a surprise.

AndreAIXIDORAndreAIXIDOR8 months ago

I think after enslaving Liz he should dispell the familiar binding on Kate since he didn't want to brainwash her

And I like for Max to talk with his demon side it would like a therapy session for them

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Janice looks to have a rather toxic personality. Not a positive flow for the story...

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