All Comments on 'Succubus Master Pt. 13'

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jimmy_loganjimmy_loganabout 1 year ago

Wow. Pretty nice twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

thonks, we of the collective demands more!

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

Excellent Chapter, thanks! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

mharrisonmharrisonabout 1 year ago

Great story - really loving it.

This might just be me and not sure if others have this issue but I sometimes find remembering character names a bit of an issue - especially when i've been reading several other stories while waiting for the next chapter in a series i'm following.... :(

Having a very brief reminder of the story so far as an intro would be very helpful. This isn't specifically about this series but all on here.

Regardless of whether you take any notice of these comments many thanks are still in order for sharing your work with us all here.... very much looking forward to reading more.

LynchjimLynchjimabout 1 year ago

Love it fella I’m awaiting part 14 on Patreon please hurry I’m desperate to read the seduction of Ella’s mother asap please. 5 HUGE MASSIVE ENORMOUS STARS FOR YOU MY FAVORITE AUTHOR

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderrrrful

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430about 1 year ago

I had to go back and re-read a few chapters to catch-up before I read this one. This is one of my favorite current stories. Thanks.

TheCuckSlayerTheCuckSlayerabout 1 year ago

Great power comes with great responsibility. I wonder what Max has to endure with that much power.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

First class profession , I was going to write “story” but it’s an adventure , thank you, don’t keep us waiting too long for the rest

KahunabobKahunabobabout 1 year ago

Well, the only bad thing about this chapter is that it's currently (2023.04.02) the last one! Looking forward to the next instalment of Max's Mayhem ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I literly found this story yesterday and I couldn't stop reading and now it's over (for now)! I don't want to rush an artist but PLEASE HURRY!

ZephyrwhirlZephyrwhirlabout 1 year ago

Well, I've ingested this tale today. Enthralling. Very well written and could simply go on and on and on.

AndreAIXIDORAndreAIXIDOR8 months ago

I know that sophia was a witch!! It fits the story

Bravo beautiful chapter

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