All Comments on 'Succubus Office Pt. 01'

Lol, kicked out of Hell!! Look's good, keep up and let's met the rest of the staff up close and personal.

Great start! Keep going !

Super excited to see more of this

I like the premise a lot! Quick question though, is there gonna be an angel involved?

I really enjoyed this story. The premise is interesting and the style is entertaining. I hope this ends up as a series too.

What a great concept for a story. I want to see what happens with the triplets and of course I want to see the virgin earn her horns. Talk about a dream come true, damn. Please feel free to write as much as you like on this one. I am sure you will have a happy audience.

RE angels: mmmaybe but not for a long time

Great so far can't wait for more.

It was an informative, if slightly short, chapter. I liked worldbulding, a good premise for a harem. Although I think that it is worth paying considerable attention to the smooth change in the moral principles of the protagonist. In my opinion, every healthy man would be happy to have a harem, but every participant should be satisfied with the state of things. So, harem management deconstruction, ahoy!

It makes sense that in the future, a circle of girls will be formed with whom Jim is in a close romantic relationship. This circle will be different from the other sex partners in the office. Please do not include so many girls in this group that it will be difficult for you to create deep unique personalities for them.

I would love to read the interludes from the point of view of the succubi in the office to immerse myself in their alien mindset.

It would also be very cool to learn other secret differences in the structure of the bodies of succubi, and their unique abilities. For example trhree hole from the TV show Ugly Americans

Great setup and I very much look forward to more. I really have come to enjoy this genre.

Great story, waiting/wanting more.

Looking forward to it continuing soon.

Ooooo excited for this series. Please keep on writing. If possible update when we can expect the next chapter. A rough timeline. Looking forward to this

Milk of Lilith is a brilliant idea! That really should exist in real life.