All Comments on 'Suddenly A Succubus Ch. 01'

by TheNyxianLily

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Nice. Wouldn't mind her as classmate.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great beginning. Part 2?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great first start. Can’t wait to see where this goes, but the beginning was perfect

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Funny, exciting, well written, no obvious spelling issues, and a fun twist ending. Thank you for writing this. Looking forward to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This was honestly fantastic to read, fun well paced, excellent smut and I honestly can’t wait to see how this progresses

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

very cute, more please !

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

more so gooooooooooooood

effjooeffjoo7 months ago

Absolutely fantastic! Can't wait for the story to continue and see what other changes show up!

OtterlyMindblowingOtterlyMindblowing7 months ago

This is your FIRST SUBMISSION? Consider me a follower, and I look forward to much more from you!

lAnatomistelAnatomiste7 months ago

Yes, why _does_ she have a tail?

Well, done, 5-stars.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Damn good, hope to see more.

Damonkey916Damonkey9167 months ago

Awesome first release…definitely gonna follow this story

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Very well written, good job of building the characters while advancing the plot. It a single negative comment for a first time story is something you should be rightly proud of.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Hope to see this continue!

EverydayMagicEverydayMagic6 months ago

Excellent first story! Well written and no obvious grammatical errors. I enjoy your character development and slow build-up. Don't be afraid to go further in developing your characters backgrounds and conflicts. I'm looking forwards to your future chapters. 5 stars!

percheronpercheron4 months ago

I just found out about your writing. Great beginning, can't wait to read the next chapters

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great beginning, I’m looking forward to reading and enjoying your explorations, fun stuff! Bravo 👏

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

"Nick," Amara turned to her best friend, her voice shaking, "Why do I have a tail?"

Apparently, her parents have more interesting back-stories than she thought. 🤣

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Welcome! My name is Nyx, and I'm an amateur writer. To be honest, I've never really written before; My total body of work includes a short story or two from high school, and the weekly recaps of my D&D sessions. The written word has always fascinated me, but I never really fo...

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