by TheNyxianLily
Great first start. Can’t wait to see where this goes, but the beginning was perfect
Funny, exciting, well written, no obvious spelling issues, and a fun twist ending. Thank you for writing this. Looking forward to more from you.
This was honestly fantastic to read, fun well paced, excellent smut and I honestly can’t wait to see how this progresses
Absolutely fantastic! Can't wait for the story to continue and see what other changes show up!
This is your FIRST SUBMISSION? Consider me a follower, and I look forward to much more from you!
Very well written, good job of building the characters while advancing the plot. It a single negative comment for a first time story is something you should be rightly proud of.
Excellent first story! Well written and no obvious grammatical errors. I enjoy your character development and slow build-up. Don't be afraid to go further in developing your characters backgrounds and conflicts. I'm looking forwards to your future chapters. 5 stars!
I just found out about your writing. Great beginning, can't wait to read the next chapters
Great beginning, I’m looking forward to reading and enjoying your explorations, fun stuff! Bravo 👏
"Nick," Amara turned to her best friend, her voice shaking, "Why do I have a tail?"
Apparently, her parents have more interesting back-stories than she thought. 🤣