All Comments on 'Sue's Secret'

Fantastic! Loved it. Please, do let there be more to come!

Fantastic! possibilities, more please?

Hi Alicante,

To answer your question, YES, please continue. Fun premise with lots of promise. Oh, you may want to edit the middle where Jane follows you upstairs. You accidentally used Sue’s name.

Good stuff overall. Looking forward to where this May go.

Good premise.

But sex is seriously rushed.

She caught him jerking. She didn't ask him how he liked watching her videos.

She didn't ask him how long he'd been jerking to her? Or how many times? Or about why he was doing it? Or why he'd even looked for her porn?

Three stars.

Potential to be a good series if not rushed!