All Comments on 'Sugar and Spice Ch. 05'

Love it!

A good read just watch out for those errors that trip up the smooth flow. Thanks for sharing.

It wasn't one of the best, but that didn't detract much from the lovely plot & it's sweetness. Write more to get better & thanks for sharing this! :)

Just so all of the "Sugar and Spice" fans know, I've begun a new series featuring Murphy, Amber and Mandy's oldest child and oldest daughter. She will be discovering her sexuality in the series "Rosarum et Tulips" which means "Roses and Tulips" in Latin. Just submitted it in the early hours of the morning, and was pretty much half asleep when it was done, but I worked really hard and I think people who have followed "Sugar and Spice" could potentially really enjoy it. The story begins when Murphy is eighteen, much like her mother's, so Amber and Mandy are in their thirties. They don't make as big of an appearance (in the first one, just a cameo or two) but I will definitely make their roles bigger as the story develops. Some fans told me that I didn't flesh out very much at the beginning of "Sugar and Spice", so that's what I wanted to do here. Murphy is a charming young woman, and I hope many, if not all, of you "Sugar and Spice" fans enjoy her. Her first appearance as a lead character will appear in the next week or so.

Love you guys!

--naughtykitten21

That was an awesome finish ! You rock!

Like it, just had questions like how Ben get the ring