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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If this was your first story...

Id tell you youre off to an ok start but you have lots of work to do. Since youve written thousands of these Ill tell you your writing sucks. You cant write dialog, characters, or remotely interesting sex. As a black man Im insulted by how racist every one of your characters is. You are a disgrace.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...