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LarryInSeattleover 11 years agoAnnoying
The use of paragraph splits in the middle of sentences. Please stop that. Other than that, overall impression is not so bad.
LarryInSeattleover 11 years agoAlso, get an editor
Improper use of words and missing words in sentences...annoying.
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