All Comments on 'Summer Camping Ch. 02-03'

married to a whore and his ego want let him see it.weak asshole.

This one has a bit of moral ambiguity. It really wouldn't be except the character has misgivings about cheating. Whoops. Not in a swinging relationship and suddenly he doesn't have enough blood for both heads. No problem with that, in story terms at least – that's what makes drama.

The mechanics of the writing are very good. Clear descriptions without going overboard, nice pacing, characters that are "pleasant" to look at, and a good deal of voyeuristic excitement.

Only drawback is that drama – it can be a mood killer for someone seeking a quick fix. For the patient, it's tolerable.

The poor guy doesn't know he is a man ! Feels guilty for her being raped ? Did he hear any screaming? Writer do you feel helpless - does it excite you?

We need a continuation on this one. Do you re-connect with Cindy and make something more permanent with her?

you left us hanging bill. your a wimp because you didn't have the balls to ask your wife why she walked over there and showed herself. you were afraid of what she would say. you didnt want her to want a dick with a spine behind it. if you live like a wimp and don't put your foot down you will be treated as a wimp, even buy your wife. you didn't have the balls to ask if she was molested in the shower or what the fuck went on? give her to a man and he will keep her for himself, and others away and she won't have to figure out what to do in different situations, he'll direct things

you left us hanging bill. your a wimp because you didn't have the balls to ask your wife why she walked over there and showed herself. you were afraid of what she would say. you didnt want her to want a dick with a spine behind it. if you live like a wimp and don't put your foot down you will be treated as a wimp, even buy your wife. you didn't have the balls to ask if she was molested in the shower or what the fuck went on? give her to a man and he will keep her for himself, and others away and she won't have to figure out what to do in different situations, he'll direct things

I gave it 2**.

You assholes do realize that HE CHEATED TOO, right. While you are calling him a wimp for not handling his wife, why is it ok for him to cheat?

Yep, they cheated and deserve to remain together as wimp & slut. Hope the hubbies calls the skank back and gets more revenge.

This couple are both cheating assholes.