All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 07'

Not fair!! u cant go doin stuff wid strangers and thn be sad about it :S.... if u want romance u gotta give it up....Mr tyke cud turn this into a love story if he wants :).... But this confusion is bad for the plot and it shud be cleared up :(

Thanks for the comment although I do tend to disagree (and I was there). The whole series is a love story if you're looking hard enough. Most of the characters eventually paired off and many married; happens all the time in small villages. I think I was in love with Sue, in fact I know I was, but I'd shared her from the outset and she obviously enjoyed it.

That was bloody brilliant. Your writing is fantastic. Got me very wet indeed.

I love wet endings, keep reading!

This is the kind of writing you do best. Slow and sensual - all the little details of movement and sensation. Really well done! I loved it!

lol

it was completely the strangers and sams fault for not releasing her hands to cover herself when the usher came

she says that the stranger was kind i kind man would not showoff her to usher

she says sam will protect her lol sam never protected her he actually pimped her

he is blaming her for usher to almost rape her

whereas he and his friends finger raped her so many times

whats qualifies him to think he or his friend is entitled to her body

sam never bothered he never stopped when she said no during her finger rape ordeals

how hypocriric are all the male characters in your stories sam and the other guys and the strangers

all of male characters blame and shame the victims when its completely their choice not to rape in first place whether its alan and his friends ,sam ,the stranger,the usher or the lads

Marvelous story and very well written. I thought the story could have ended somewhat differently though.