All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
It's really too bad

I keep reading this story and keep waiting for Sue to grow a spine and start standing up for herself and becoming a master of her own body. Until now she has been mostly pretty pathetic with this inability to stand up to all these guys taking things from her without asking. A bunch of rapists plus a pathetic ragdoll - not the tastiest combination... I keep waiting for her to kick one of them in the nuts or biting a dick so they would learn not to presume so much, but she just keeps giving in. I understand the author's attempt to show that she actually likes sex, and that is fine, but it is not fine for the men to not even ask whether she wants that thing she likes with them or with someone else. There is something fundamentally flawed in the author's approach to the men in these chapters that makes the overall story a bit icky...

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