All Comments on 'Summer Fireworks'

by DeLaFaye

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, just enough of sex and romance to keep me interested, too bad the story ends with memories rather than more meetings.

DeLaFayeDeLaFayeover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback! It's always a challenge between not enough and too much. I generally lean towards the latter so I consciously try to scale it back. Good to know someone else besides me thinks I should loosen that up a bit! Thank you for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your story reminds me of a line from Billy Joel's "Piano Man"; ......it's sad and it's sweet, and I knew it complete."

Gave you a 5.

DeLaFayeDeLaFayeover 1 year agoAuthor

I think that is the nicest compliment I’ve ever received for my writing, thank you so much! And thank you for the rating/feedback! 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyed.

DeLaFayeDeLaFayeover 1 year agoAuthor

Happy to hear it!

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 1 year ago

The joys of summer!

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DeLaFayeDeLaFayeover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback!

joeoggijoeoggiover 1 year ago

Summer love. Wistfull. Fulfilling. Always hot but doomed as August turns into the reality of September. Good job of reliving those memories.

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