All Comments on 'Summer Fun in Hana, Hawaii'

by ErosOJoy

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AuralStimulationAuralStimulationover 2 years ago

I absolutely loved this very short, sweet, sensual piece and how well written and erotic it was. Kudos to ErosOJoy. I will be thinking of Hana and Bill all day.

ToyboytoherToyboytoherover 2 years ago

Hot stuff! The twist of pleasing her until she is slippery on fire reminds me of one I am working on. Its so good hot wet and sticky even when both are confused of love in there own way.

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Ms. Eros O. Joy is new to the erotica genre. Published under numerous pen names in other genres, she has decided to dive into the deep waters provided by Literotica. The intent is to submit a story a week and see how readers react. If the reviews are good, there may be more. ...