All Comments on 'Summer Housing'

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Steve OrshonSteve Orshonalmost 11 years ago
Really, really hot.

While I can't honestly say this is an original scenario, it was well executed. The writing is excellent and the pace balanced. Good job.

loveloverloveloverover 4 years ago
Promising:

Not fulfilled but sooo nicely hinted. Narrator is smooth!

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