All Comments on 'Summer Lightning'

and cut? it just stops there? need part 2 soon

Read this piece because of the title, and turned out to be a character driven, interesting, humorous storyline. Summer and Phoenix well developed. On downside, too long, almost repetitious in places and the few sex scenes hardly erotic — not expecting screaming expletives in capital letters, just scenes consistent with title. Liked it but barely above average.

This is the best story I have read on the Literotica site. Would that I could write as well as you. Well done, Thank you.

Hi guys, I have just returned from vacation to find that the publication of this story was glitched and it was somehow cut in half, ending abruptly. I didn't see it published as parental controls were in place at the time.

I have submitted the rest as Part Two picking up from the start of the truncated chapter.

Sincere apologies.