by natalieprendergast
I can tell you love this genre. Great story, can't wait for chapter 2.
just love the story line and really into the cfnm scene. you made my day!
CFNM is one of my favorite erotic situations and this one comes at you from a new angle! An original, for sure. Keep writing this one.
You've captured something unique ~ the plot, the characters, the authentic nature of the situation. This holds the potential of becoming a GREAT movie someday. For now; you've become an instant classic. Thanks, Ron
I loved it. You are writing about my age group.
As a young man, I had major desires to be in a situation like this. I just didn't know how to go about it without coming across as a pervert.
Please pen the next chapter soon.
After 4 grammatical errors, 6 spelling errors, and no sex I'm dropping out.
The portrayal of Adam was very annoying but I suppose that we have to accept that he is destined for scholarship. I kept reading because the other story is compelling. I hope that I will find that Adam is now gone off to university and the rollout will not involve spending too much time on his character. Either that, or his smarts are about to increase by many leaps.
A great chapter for Adam's introduction into his attractive Step Mother's "world"