by MagicFingers
Hi Magic Fingers,
you really have magic fingers on your keyboard.
I like your story very much, your fantasy about twins is very enjoyable.
I liked the threesome between Mel & the guys the best. I do think its getting a LITTLE redundant though. One thing I really liked about your story was the uniqueness of the plot. Don't get me wrong, its still good, I'm not bored, but I really hope you'll come up with something completely new and different for the next part. I'm personally not to crazy about about the twosome, turned threesome, turned orgy, because I think becomes impersonal, mindless sex, with no real connection between the people involved. So, while I like your cousin idea, I would like to see just the twins with a new person or two, another brother & sister would be great. Although, I don't know how you would be able to leave the other two out without hurting the relationships they are trying to built, even though their strongest connection is w/each other. I don't know, just a thought. I'm sure you'll come up w/something great, soon I hope!
enjoying your wonderful stories of mel and mike and friends cant wait for the next chapter, i agree with the other comments, keep it in this tight group. Something tells me you will and they will have a kick arse summer of discoveries and sex romps. will you be doing one where they just mentally fuck each other to orgasm? like i said cant wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work.
And I thought It couldn't get any hotter...
I'm really curious to read the next chapter!
Keep it cumming!