All Comments on 'Summer Surprise Pt. 14'

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HargaHargaover 2 years ago

Hey, it's been awhile since I committed on the series. I still have concerns about how the 3 protagonist relationship is being portrayed but I think I see Chloe only has the best interest of her friends in mine. The one thing that concerns me is how Dianne is going to react being under the control of Sophie, even just as a proxy for Chloe. She only did this because she knew she could trust Chloe and Matt. You've describe a number of times in this story, and others, that control can be temporarily transferred to other masters. I understand that subs don't have to have a strong attachment to serve a master but will Dianne experience any problems once Chloe releases daily control. I also think at this point Matt should just Sub to Chloe also as he is almost doing that know. I mean his control of Dianne is minimal at best and even his hard and fast rule with her (no guys) has been broken once and it looks like it will again. Great writing and story.

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